Inspired from "Bluffs" by Tara Donovan
It feels like crystals, clear and transparent
It tastes like the crisp, alleviating smell of winter
It sounds like the firm, fluid, glossy texture
It smells like the frigid sensation of water trickling down your throat
It looks like the soft and calming sound of the melting water, dripping slowly on the pavement
It is listening, tasting, smelling, seeing, and feeling the beauty of the simplicity in nature.
Great job Jess! I really could just imagine this dangling icicle without really seeing it. You did a great job of describing the icicle as if you were standing right next to it. Great job overall!
ReplyDeleteI agree with allie! You write so the reader is able to just imagine the icicle! Good job hun! (: <3
ReplyDeleteThat is really good and I like your word choice and description. Good job Jess!
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